| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] |
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Reviewed By: sdfsd On: April 27, 2010 18:02 PDT
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woah! didn't suspect nail, you distracted me with tien! well done
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2010 16:39 PDT
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I'd say 'poor Goku and Chichi' if I wasn't too thrilled by more B/V stuff. Great chapter, it was good that they didn't fight each other off too much and hey, Vegeta finally got what he dreamed of for so long ;) Vegeta's still trying to fight off the truth about mating it seems but at least he's going with it a little bit. And Dun Dun DUNNNNNNN, The mole has been revealed finally, though I did kind of suspect it when he questioned Bulma they way he did. Great chapter, can't wait 'til next time.
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Reviewed By: shadow'sgirl On: April 12, 2010 18:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!! i have read all 24 chapters in 2 days!! ..and yes i do have a life lol i should be writing my paper for english class but i just had to keep finding out what happened next!! Im dying to know who the leak is...i have 2 guesses...Nail / Tien....we'll see if im right! Anyway, keep up the awesome work and dont stop the story till its finished!!
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Reviewed By: cyberbat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2010 12:21 PDT
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Ah, the cliff hanger! Well done on the dramatic and the very Goku humor ending. I can't wait to read the rest and see how the drama is going to play out.
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2010 18:58 PDT
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Oh boy, Goku is going to have to do some serious grovelling, isn't he? I'd say I hope he's learned his lesson, but this IS Goku we're talking about. I love your Mrs. Briefs, so matter of fact. "Do you have lots of condoms?" Hahaha, choice! And Nappa's night time sounds and smells... haha! Poor Piccolo! But we didn't see much B/V interaction. (whine) Hopefully we'll see more than Bulma's lusty thoughts next chapter. :) Somehow I doubt he will care about her less than perfect appearance. Maybe Vegeta would find a female grease monkey attractive the way a guy who cooks and irons is attractive to some women.
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 23:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOO how could you end it there!!! AAAAAH! Must have more! More more more more!! The suspense is KILLING me!
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Reviewed By: venus legacy not logged On: March 31, 2010 21:10 PDT
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wow, you never dissappoint, this chapter more than surpassed expectations, there was so much happening, and yet you remained true to each character, giving them the nuance and the detail necessary for me to empathise with them, I liked the insight into Zarbon's situation, you have definitely made him a more multifaceted character with depth, I see the struggles within him, and I feel I can understand where he is coming from and the choices he made. Oh my gosh, the reunion scene was potently electrifying, you got the tension, the emotions, everything was written very well, poor sixteen. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 20:29 PDT
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Wow, that was awkward indeed but I understand why it had to be done. Hopefully they'll work it out eventually. And I loved Krillin picking up on Vegeta's glare when Bulma asked if he wanted her to come along. Not too much interaction between Bulma and Vegeta but a lot happened so that's to be expected. I'd love to know what Vegeta thought when he first saw her. No doubt when she was hugging Goku he was feeling something there. Can't wait 'til next time.
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Title: Update!
Reviewed By: Jo On: March 28, 2010 10:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update =D
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Reviewed By: yunglucyboo On: March 25, 2010 16:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story keeps getting better. Lol Not that it wasn't already. I love how Vegeta is accepting his feelings, and how he's acting on it. The part where he was like telling bulma indirectly he likes her, even if it was sexual from the beginning. Although she didn't let him finish, I'm thinking he might told her feelings. Lol Other then that this story is awesome! So keep up the great work of thoughts!!!
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Title: Chapters 21 - 23
Reviewed By: not a member On: March 23, 2010 08:58 PDT
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Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile! Great last three chapters, Nail's interaction with Bulma was interesting if not a little hostile to say the least, but sheds a little more light on those mysterious Nameks. Also, Goku and Piccolo's escape attempt was pretty intense, unfortunate that it didn't work but I am so excited now that the Saiyans are going back to Red Station! Chi Chi is going to have a coronary when she sees Goku, I'm really excited to see that interaction. Also really thrilled to see more of my favorites, Bulma and Vegeta. He's just got it so bad for that girl, doesn't he? It'll be fun to see where this goes. Keep it up! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2010 16:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Squee!!! I love you lol this is such a great story, even if the chapters are uneventful they keep you interested just to see what is going to happen next. Joygasm, that made me giggle. This last chapter was so funny too. Its been a long time since a story actually made me laugh. "You've been frowning at that email for nearly 10 minutes." Nearly split my sides. You are so good at keeping everyone in character and at the same time making them fit into your story line. Ah the ever awaited second meeting. I can't wait for the update!
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Reviewed By: venus legacy not logged On: March 13, 2010 00:36 PST
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this chapter is amazing and that Bulma and Vegeta interaction was smoking, also quite interesting seeing Vegeta initiate the change in mood, i can't wait till they meet again. i worry about goku though and the extent to which his captivity has affected him, hopefully a stay at the red station will be just what the doctor ordered.
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2010 09:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So...is Chichi going to help Goku with some "sexual healing" when they get back to Red Station? Heaven knows they both need it! I'd like to see some G/CC action! And of course I cannot wait for the B/V reunion either! :)
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Reviewed By: xaverri [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2010 08:34 PST
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I just got word that I have a new appartment since yesterday, but this chapter made my day more than that :D
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