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| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] | | Pages (25): [ « ‹ 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 › » ] | Reviewed By: bulma-the-babe On: January 26, 2010 07:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing! I'm glad I found it. I have to say, I'm kind of disappointed that Bulma isn't pregnant, cause that would have made for some interesting plot twists for sure. I really don't think Vegeta, in this particular story would try to stay with Bulma, per say, not that he wouldn't care, but I think he's much too set in his way to think of settling down with her, and likewise Bulma is much to independant to think of tying him down. Just my thoughts :D I like this whole twist with Zarbon, and I hope that he will become a key player in Vengeance's plan. I really do think that Zarbon hated Frieza, and although he and Vegeta had their issues, I think it was mostly jealousy as you so nicely showed :) I think Zarbon would make a fantastic double agent, a way to spy on Frieza. Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon! Bulma-the-babe bulma_the_babe2004@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 07:25 PST
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Things are getting interesting. Vegeta's now aware that Ginyu is in the mix so at least he's can warn the others about that. Of course, you're leaving it open to who the traitor could be so it's difficult to pinpoint which slightly suspicious person is the actual mole. And it's good that Bulma isn't pregnant. It'd be hard to work that into this kind of fic, though I bet that if/when Vegeta learns that there was a chance, the beast inside him would have liked the idea while Vegeta was still trying to push his feelings away XD. Can't wait 'til next time.
| Reviewed By: Shinny On: January 25, 2010 22:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An absolutely fantasticfic! Being a somewhat connosieur of V/B fanfics I can definately say I enjoyed this a lot more than a most of the fics I've ever read! The recent chapter was a great birthday present for my 24th, which was on the 26th , heh. 10/10 for everything-brilliant! Keep writing, I'm desperate to read more! Katania/Shinny UK
| Title: Chapter 19
Reviewed By: not a member On: January 19, 2010 23:37 PST
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So glad to see that you've updated. This was another great chapter, particularly the end bit about Goku -- very interesting look at his more feral, Saiyan side. Maybe foreshadowing in the dream? I'm glad to know that he and Piccolo remain in the story... as it gives me hope that they will run into the others later. I really like your interpretation of Goku's "dark side," as he retains that childlike thought process but with a morbid, sinister twist. On a lighter note, the discussion between Nappa and the other Saiyans was hilarious, you have really developed the dynamic relationships between the four of them quite well and with much mastery. Also, your scene with Bulma and Gero left my curiosity piqued -- I am quite interested in what role the androids will be playing further along in your story. Great update, loved reading it, keep it up! Thanks!
| Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2010 17:05 PST
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Dear Assface, hahaha... He deserved that. The part with Gero was creepy, and I felt bad for poor Goku. Most of all though, I am looking forward to more BV interaction. :)
| Reviewed By: DragonNebula On: January 16, 2010 20:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just keeps getting better! You really moved the plot along with this chapter! And I'm triplelly glade we got an update on Goku and Piccolo, and I love what you are doing with them---(not the whole slave camp and suffering, but it dose make for a good read), their personallities seem to be switching a bit, and with the rest of the charaters, I am truelly intrested in seeing where you take'em! Also, having a intelligent Nappa is sooo refreshing. Again, all awsome. Please keep it up!!
| Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2010 16:36 PST
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You want to know what we think then: UPDATE SOONER!!!!! I have been waiting for this story to receive an update almost everyday and now that it has all I can say is thank you! I really do love this story and cant wait to see what happens next. So once again PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
| Reviewed By: Venus Legacy not logged On: January 15, 2010 14:06 PST
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I'm sorry I had to review this latest chapter I couldn't even be bothered to log in for a signed review. that last section was very poignant an powerful that extended metaphor was very telling, revealling so many layers to Goku's inner psyche. There is something about the way you write goku, although he is not shown very often when you do place him in the story it always leaves an impression on me. Even the detail in the unspoken gestures, like when Piccollo see the gleam in his eye, this man (or saiyan) who is sort of the goku we know and love, but yet this experience is showing that maybe he isn't, is it changing him. Man, every time you write goku I always get conflicted over who i'm supposed to give my love to, Goku or Vegeta, I like how you deal with both characters, I think I will have both :-) And I am surprised at how much i am likin your nappa, sometimes it's strange as it seems that maybe Nappa is the top dog, or maybe the old dog, who can still command respect from his reluctant pups. That scene with them all laying on their backs to listen to his story. And frikkin gero, he is all kinds of creepy how can he make me want to chuckle one moment and then arouse fear in the same instance, I could feel Bulma's belly flip flop when he said so casually 'i will kill you' and his blase way of speaking about how he will get rid of freeza. He's the sort of person where you would need to seriously worry if you didn't hear from him from a while, he only reveals what he wants to be revealed, Bulma thought she was playing him at his own game, but he held the cards all along. I hope you had a good holiday, and Happy new year!
| Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2010 15:25 PST
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Yay, a new chapter at last! I understand what you mean by taking some time off though. It's good that Nappa finally got around to talking to Vegeta about his issues, though Vegeta is still in denial mode. And now Radditz is affected. Bulma's not having much luck on her side either but hopefully she'll get things together. Can't wait 'til Blue and Vengeance finally talk to each other again.
| Reviewed By: hibari On: January 06, 2010 21:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so good when are we getting the next chapter?
| Reviewed By: cyberbat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2010 14:29 PST
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I love it when Vegeta goes crazy! *grin* Update soon!!
| Title: Chapter 18
Reviewed By: not a member On: December 27, 2009 11:42 PST
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I can't believe I didn't review this when I first read it -- I came back to check for updates though, and reread the 18th chapter. Very good, I absolutely love how in touch you are with these characters and how well you have developed them throughout the course of this story. I am very interested in what Nappa had to say to the other Saiyans about mating; I'm assuming it will be most relevant in later chapters. I'm hoping that Bulma gets on Tien and takes Vegeta's advice seriously, I can see now where so many things can go terribly wrong. I am really curious to find out how Bulma and Vegeta will meet again -- and if those alien pregnancy tests were legit or not. Great chapter, sorry I'm leaving this review so late, keep up the awesome writing. Thanks!
| Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2009 18:01 PST
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Great chapter. Like I said last time: Vegeta may not realize it but he's fallen hard for Bulma. Really, really hard. XD I love how far into denial he had gone and all the fighting himself he had to do. Of course having sex with that 'ugly' woman wouldn't compare. Not when his instincts have already decided on Bulma. Wow, just plain wow.
| Reviewed By: anonessque On: December 14, 2009 04:32 PST
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An other great chapter! The only thing that bugged me was Bulma's dirty mouth. I mean having more than 3 'fucks' in a sentence just puts me off. Educated intelligent people can express themselves better than that.
| Title: OMFG!!!
Reviewed By: msissyburrows@aol.com On: December 13, 2009 19:27 PST
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Crazybastardsayswhat. Vegeta: "What?" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You wern't Kidding! I would say Veggie has it bad for Bulma-Chan is kinda understated?!?!?!?! Poor Nappa Must have been embarrassed... There gonna get an ass kicking when Vegeta gets back to his quarters... Please get to work on your next chappie as soon as possible, As I have a great 'Need!' HAHAHA The perv in me is drawn out!
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