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| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] | | Pages (25): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2011 04:56 PDT
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Once again you bring forth a marvelous chapter and make my day! :) Love the scene with Nappa and Dr. Briefs though poor Nappa will be disappointed when Trunks has all the coloring of his mother. haha He'd probably still go ga-ga over him. I still love Puar and Radditz. I had never thought of them as a couple before the fic but now I have a hard time not picturing them together. They are such a cute and comedic pair. Missing the B&V but I did like Zarbon's commentary on Vegeta and Bulma's actions. I can't wait until the next chapter. I'm always super happy to see an update in my email. Keep up the good work! Until next time! :3 | Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2011 18:25 PDT
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I loved the different point of views you have in this chapter. Kind of cool to read what the other characters think. | Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: May 31, 2011 16:13 PDT
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yay! more delicious men for red station! sorry for not reviewing sooner as i was out of the country :) I missed you! hsha | Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2011 02:16 PDT
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Love the story so far. I'm not into animal sex or MM (BTW Puar was female) so I just skip those. But the B/V part and the adventure is great. I really feel sorry for Zarbon and hope you wont kill him off. Ginyu is funny. All in all a very well written story. Except for the cat/saiyan thing lol | Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2011 07:28 PDT
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Omg, I died laughing at this part: "Radditz really wished he’d managed a different disguise. The hood he was wearing trapped all of his hair against his neck, and it was starting to itch. His tail was coiled tightly around his waist, hidden beneath the long hem of his sweater; he’d had to promise to keep it there so that Vegeta would let him out. Oh well, at least he hadn’t been made to shove it down one pant-leg." LOL, shove his tail down one pant leg hahahaha, I'm still laughing. Omg lmao again: Luckily for her, she could count on the fact that Krillin would probably die a thousand horrible deaths before allowing Eighteen out of his sight; the little guy had it bad. A thousand horrible deaths, LOL. Lol this chapter was hilarious, so many more lines I would quote but you know you're an awesome writer :P Update soon! | Title: lexylou
Reviewed By: lexylou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2011 03:14 PDT
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I really love your fan fics, but i'd have to say 'Vengence' is my favorite. Keep up the good work. | Reviewed By: LareBearr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2011 20:21 PDT
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Wow, I'm real excited for the next chapter! Sorry I haven't reviewed recently. I have no excuse. :x Awesome as usual! Update soon! | Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2011 02:34 PDT
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It's me again! Another lovely chapter, as expected. It was good to see a little B and V. It's been a while for them. I'm excited to meet Tarble, though I guess Veggie is less so. "I'm never having kids." Oh no! Poor Trunks. Loved the part with Puar and Radditz, they are my second favorite pairing in this. I love them. So cute. I knew somehow everyone (Zarbon, Bulma, etc) would meet up. I wonder how Vegeta is going to react though...hmm. I like the Androids but I'm so suspicious of them. Should I be? I'm going to have to read to find out, I know." Again, I loved it as always! Great job! Until next chapter, byebye! | Title: happy anniversary!
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2011 19:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I, for one, am happy that u continue to update this fic. I truly enjoy your writing, and hope u never stop writing b/v fics. LOL! Anyway, love the scenes between krillan and eighteen. I've grown to love all the couples in this fic. Although, I'm not a fan of goku and chichi. I don't mind them so much in this story. Thanks for the quick update. | Reviewed By: Kaitlyn On: May 16, 2011 17:16 PDT
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Masterful, as always! | Title: ch 40
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2011 07:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, I really love the introduction of the Androids, I also liked how you introduced them with Krillan's discovery, at first i was thinking who is the blonde that Krillian found, I was racking my brain, and even thought, no way is it Mrs Briefs, lol, I squealed in excitement when i realised it was the androids. You keep introducing new twists and turns to this story which never ceased to keep me hooked. The previous chapters with Zarbon's escape the introduction of new characters, Goku healing (that was a cute goku and Chichi moment, by the way, when she was drying him off I was like awww). You really have the Android characterisations so well written, you manage to merge the human with the synthetic, yet at the same time show the conflict between these two components as the Androids struggle to integrate, missing social cues, misinterpretations. I really can't wait to see where you go with this, and what role the Androids will play, especially with the fearsome, balsy, yet sassy, Bulma Briefs as their 'Mother' (I liked that). Red Station has managed to build up quite the army, 2 Supersaiyan's, 3 Androids, 3 saiyans, a half saiyan, and Kami, wow. Although I wonder if Dr Gero's programme of the Androids is completely gone, he seems like the sort of person that will always have a back up, some failsafe or trigger. Oh I also liked the interaction between Dende and Bulma, it was a very touching scene, showing the struggles and turmoils that are placed upon a leader, especially at such a young age. I really don't want this story to end, hope there is at least 100 more chapters (bats eyelashes) lol. Seriously though, this is the only dragonball z story I read | Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2011 07:51 PDT
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*edit* (last review cut me off)Hello again! You've delivered another awesome chapter as usual (and don't worry I appreciate the responses. It lets me know you appreciate the feedback as much as I appreciate your fabulous work ^^) Very interesting to see 17 and 18 out and about. Their coldness is a little suspicious but maybe they'll turn out to be allies and not enemies this time around. It would be sad if Krillin's love interest turned against him. Poor guy never catches a break. haha Love the Raditz/Puar discussion about children and who wears the pants. Momma Raditz! haha Perhaps that was foreshadowing? Either way I love the moment. It was adorable! Haven't seen much B and V recently. Maybe we'll see some of that soon? Maybe not? Fantastic as always! You've kept me coming back for 40 chapters now! Congratulations! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next one! :) | Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2011 07:45 PDT
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Hello again! You've delivered another awesome chapter as usual (and don't worry I appreciate the responses. It lets me know you appreciate the feedback as much as I appreciate your fabulous work ^^) Very interesting to see 17 and 18 out and about. Their coldness is a little suspicious but maybe they'll turn out to be allies and not enemies this time around. It would be sad if Krillin's love interest turned against him. Poor guy never catches a break. haha Love the Raditz/Puar discussion about children and who wears the pants. Momma Raditz | Reviewed By: Gohans onna On: May 02, 2011 19:43 PDT
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Awwww poor dende! Cute chapter, more more more! | Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: May 02, 2011 07:33 PDT
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You know, if Raditz and Puar need a surrogate I am available :P :) and yay they r finally awake! Hooray for 18's nice vagina lol | | Pages (25): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
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