| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] |
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2012 21:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the chapter, it was beautifully written. I like how you describe the struggles each character goes through, and how each individual handles their problems. You are amazing when it comes to writing b/v's relationship. It's so obvious that they're in love. Even tho bulma's the only one admitting it verbally, you can tell vegeta's head over heels for her. Man, I want to read more. Hope u update again soon. Oh, and Happy New Year:) |
Reviewed By: nonameoo On: December 29, 2011 10:09 PST
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I'm enjoying your story a lot. Good plot and really excellent grammar. The only issue I have is Bulma. I'm used to her as a smart spunky woman. Here she's just a bimbo who thinks about nothing else but Veggiecock. Poor Raditzu with a cat is actually funny. This gave a whole new meaning to beastiality lol But since its AU anything goes. |
Title: A bit worried.
Reviewed By: Saej On: December 20, 2011 20:23 PST
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I hope that you are fairing well. ^_^ Haven't heard from you for quite a while now. |
Title: all smothered in awesome sauce
Reviewed By: hplovecat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2011 09:53 PST
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I just need you to know that I cannot die peacefully until I've read this to the end. Easily one of my favorite BV's. |
Title: amazing!
Reviewed By: Girness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2011 15:34 PST
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I really love this story! I have been reading fanfiction for years and never really had a taste for M/M, but I really like your approch and style to the subject. Now I might check out some M/M romances! I will make sure I leave some reviews on ff.net just because this story is so awesome. Also, have you ever read Glad Day by Lisalu? It is on a BV site and the story is absolutely amazing, and it might give you some ideas for this story if you are looking for a muse. Here is the link (http://www.adimra.100megs6.com/lisalu/agladday.html) ___________________ This story has been posted so long ago and way before mediaminer came onto the web. I hope that you read it, and I am postive that you will like it. I am enjoying the puar/raddiz bit. I would have never imagined a pair like that, but your style of righting made me see the plausibility for this pairing for this story. I was wondering, will Trunks come into play before or after the frieza battle? Will dende create the dragonballs? With the dragonballs, there are so many possibilities because Vegeta could wish his planet and people home, earth could be restored, and namek could be restored. I really like how you tied up loose ends like the creation of Cell, and the third regeneration tank. I was wondering if Vegeta might teach Bulma hoe to fight just to defend herself. It seems in the story that Vegeta is secretly worried for her safety since they are going straight to Frieza to wage war. It would be a cute chapter to have Vegeta showing Bulma some moves, or possibly Dende unleashing some power from her or something. I can't wait until the next chapter! -girness girness@gmail.com |
Reviewed By: ilex9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2011 16:57 PST
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Nice to see that you are still keeping this going. I enjoyed Dende coming into his own and love the interaction between Kuririn and Eighteen. Always a pleasure to read. |
Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2011 11:29 PDT
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I had to laugh as one character after another came up frustrated or unhappy with what's going on. Even Jeice had something to complain about. I'm glad Dende is doing better though, out of everyone, and of course Mrs. B has never had a bad day--maybe a couple of bad minutes sometimes. I'm trying to let Burter/Z grow on me some more...trying! Glad to know Z's hair is better now, so he will maybe stop moping. Good luck with school! I won't be vocal about requests for updates, but you can consider it a given that I will be faithfully waiting. Thank you! |
Reviewed By: LareBearr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2011 12:23 PDT
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I like how you're developing Dende's character. And I see what you're doing with Zarbon and Burter!! lol. Poor Zarbon, all alone. But they won't top Puar and Radditz; their cuteness level is through the effing roof. XD Eighteen's development is coming along well; can't wait to see more of Seventeen! I hope you've figured out what you're gonna do with the androids! Dude, I totally understand about school taking up so much time. I'm going through the same thing. I just have one complaint about this chapter: no B/V action. :[ Hope to see them next chapter. But I was still entertained, and I still enjoyed it! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2011 19:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can totally picture Zarbon with "The Rachel" haircut. Lol! Loved the heart to heart Zarbon and Mrs briefs had. Anyway, no b/v (which makes me kinda sad), but the chapter was still entertaining as usual. I hope u update soon. |
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2011 18:08 PDT
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It's me as always. haha Once again a lovely chapter. I like that Dende is taking more authority now. Seems like he will be ok after all. I'm curious where the Burter and Zarbon connection will go but they can't possibly be as cute as Puar and Radditz. I just don't think it is possible. I got this flashback to Frenchy's Beauty School Dropout song when Mrs. Briefs said she went to beauty school. It must have turned out really well thought because I know exactly the picture of Jeniffer Aniston that you are talking about. I think. Oh and I love the Krillin and 18 awkward cuteness. I love seeing them get together. Anyway, I can't wait until the next chapter! Take care! Until next time! :) |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko((offline)) On: November 02, 2011 14:16 PDT
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:D I love that Zarbon is getting more and more.... hmm... awesome.... not a whole lot of my favorite grumpy prince. :) I have not had a good dream about him in ages either.... I need some inspiration :P |
Reviewed By: A fan... On: October 30, 2011 02:16 PDT
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Beautiful update here. Makes sparkly eyes and hopes for a new chapter before Thanksgiving. But totally no pressure. |
Reviewed By: saej On: October 21, 2011 16:04 PDT
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You're doing wonderfully so far, but some advice, hon--your plot action is starting to lag just a bit too much. I realize there is a lot to get through here, but some action is needed to beef up the plot a bit so you don't lag too much. |
Reviewed By: not a member On: October 04, 2011 17:48 PDT
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Sorry that I haven't reviewed your story in about a year and a half, I haven't been on here for some time... but I love what you've done. It's drawn me in once more, and it's been a very long time. It would be a lot for me to describe every minute reaction I've had to your plot for the 20 chapters I read before writing this, but I must say the character development is as spot on as ever, and I'm really enjoying all the interactions that Dende has at Red Station. Also, the androids are both entertaining and endearing for as lethal as they are -- I love it. I'm looking forward to keeping up with you from now on. I could easily continue to read this story for another 5 years though if you need to take your time ^_^ |
Title: Caught up *sob*
Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2011 05:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess you can tell how much I love this story and the way you're telling it. The last 3 or 4 chapters really ratcheted up the tension, and I'm a nail biter. The whole time everyone was off Red Station was very stressful! Vegeta really should have put his foot down and kept the Saiyans on board. Of course, I guess they were technically on board when they showed themselves to the hookers. I'm glad Zarbon is safe, and I admit I'm a huge fan. Whenever he gets attention, I'm thrilled, and his relationship with Vegeta is especially fun. I love Radditz's asides to him as well, and Puar's jealousy. Fun! Favorite recent line: "He really hadn't intended to begin his future of freedom by crawling into bed with the man in charge before following him across the universe; he'd done that once, and it hadn't exactly ended well." Lines like this just make me go, damn girl! You nailed it! Love the insight.Love that you gave it to Zarbon. I guess now the only thing I can do is start back at the beginning until the next update. It's really a great read, definitely in the top three of my favorite DBZ fanfics EVAH, and I say top three because I'm really indecisive and couldn't pick an absolute favorite. But I love this, and I think I'll love it more the more I read it. I love finding things I missed the first time. I'm crossing my fingers that you're still really into it to, and the RL doesn't ever get in the way. No pressure! Thanks again. |
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