| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] |
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2014 16:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
I MISS YOU!!!!!!! I miss your characters! I miss your delicious
smutty smut! This was a great chapter btw ;)
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Title: Dammit
Reviewed By: Graidon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2014 20:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sigh. Another wonderful chapter. Although the joy in my heart is
dulled by the fact that I probably won't get to read the next
chapter for several more months, but I'm just happy that you keep
updating at all. Please don't let this story die without you
finishing it. But I really must say as a 6 foot tall woman in love
with a 5'7 man, that scene between Krillin and Eighteen is
absolutely wonderful. I'm totally trying that out with him tonight
(although I'm pretty sure it won't go half as well as it did in the
chapter. Lol.)
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Reviewed By: Nova_K On: July 29, 2014 12:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
Such a GORGEOUS update! *Whew* the beginning was a little sad and
I'm really hoping you don't kill Goku here. I mean he isn't my
favourite character but I love how you've written him. Taken the
time to actually reason his inner conflict so realistically and
then allowed him to feel the contradicting emotions on the
"opposite sides of the same coin" without being able to "reoncile"
them. It's not all "good and bad" "happy and sad" right now and
seeing that it's grey! Oh truly remarkable writing! I'm hoping that
Bulma and 16 find that cure! I'm not a Krillin/18 fan but of course
you right them very, very well. So brilliant is your 18 that I
actually like her innocence crafted with her knowledge and the way
she wants to apply it into life. Sheer brilliance! I sorta expected
to just laugh at their first time but I thought it was rather sweet
... But of course you made me crack up too. Especially at Krillin's
baby boy with his smile and 18's height. The wedding to come is
just an amazing thrill and I'm soooo excited to read that. I think
it's excellent to have something so normal and exciting going on
during their struggles and basically preparations for a war. It is
going to be a war right? I mean I can't just see a one on one match
with Vegeta and Frieza alone ... Although I feel like the wedding
will be the last time for them to celebrate ... ??? As for the B/V
interaction! *grinning* sexy and steamy yet without being crude!
LOVED it. Vegeta can not wait to get his ship back while hoping
Bulma didn't pick up on the "symptoms of the other women". Lol.
Their banter in between was like foreplay! :-D but when Vegeta said
"I have an extensive mental catalogue of all the times you have
been on your knees before me,
Bulma.†Ah well, point Vegeta there
because that comeback was just too sexy to give B's "you're on your
knees" comment all the credit. I love this story, hence all the
gushing. I do tend to get carried away! But I just like to
appreciate great writing! Looking forward to more as always!!!
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Title: Fucking Fabulous!
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2014 22:38 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm always to excited to see a new chapter appear! This one was
especially great! I'm fairly sure you wrote and accurate
history/depiction of how 18 and Krillin got together. Loved it!
B&V as usual are the faves. Veggie may have to watch out. That
wedding vibe may get him instead of Bulma if he's not careful.
Thanks for the update! It was a pleasure to read as always! Until
next time!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2013 16:55 PST
Comment/Review:
WOOOHOOO!!! lol Gure is super adorable, and I dig the eighteen learning :) Missing more of my Veggie though |
Reviewed By: nut_natz On: November 19, 2013 19:17 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, It has been a while since the last chapter and I have not written a review to you in a while so i just wanted to drop a line to let you know that I am still reading and following the story. I have been following this story for years and wonder where we are going. You touched on an imprinting (like the bond) and I was wondering if it was just a hint of something or whether it was just by the way. Looking forward to see how we work on this issue with Vegeta, his brother and how they will work on their bond. I also found it interesting how Bulma noted how quickly he became so demanding of her.Something she should have realized from their first time together when he was so aggressive and possessive. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Rogue's masquerade On: November 07, 2013 16:14 PST
Comment/Review:
YEAH!!!!! another chapter!! I was so excited and this chapter was so light hearted and happy it was exactly what I needed after a bad day at work!! I genuinely can't wait for the next chapter, I'm always so excited to see that you've updated! I hope to see another chapter soon, this story is just so amazing and fun to read!! |
Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2013 17:02 PST
Comment/Review:
I was super excited to see the message in my inbox that you had updated. And I wasn't disappointed. Krillin and 18 seem to be well on their way to being a cute couple and girl talk about sex is always appreciated. haha Anyway, can't wait for the next update. I'm so glad you're still writing this story. :) Until next update! |
Reviewed By: Nova81 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2013 12:41 PDT
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I'm soooooooo in love with this story!!! Thank you, it's BRILLIANT!!! Can't wait for the next update. :-D |
Title: Chapter 36 Review
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2013 14:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I decided to re-read this fic again because I'm getting back into the Dragon Ball Z fandom, and let me say that this chapter is one of my favorites! The way you captured Vegeta's insecurities about Goku possibly having the potential to become a Super Saiyan was pure gold! Vegeta is my favorite character and I tend to think Goku's overrated, but now you have me actually rooting for Goku! I wanna see him ascend to the next level! If it does happen in your story I know it won't be nothing short of brilliant! |
Title: Welcome Back!!
Reviewed By: fazkataz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2013 05:35 PDT
Comment/Review:
My eyes almost bulged out of my sockets when I saw your updates! Welcome back Catgirl26! I shall look forward to the continuation of this epic drama. I feel like I could bribe you with some exclusive drawings if I could,... but I know that everyone needs a long break sometimes. Welcome back! |
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2013 00:02 PDT
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I am still awake and unable to sleep so, here I am continuing to read this lovely, gorgeous epic. I'm not quite done yet, but I'm about four chapters away from being totally caught up and I had to leave something here tonight. I was practically in tears over the whole scene thought Zarbon's eyes, observing the curious crew of Red Station. Holy crap, brilliant, hilarious!! And I have to say that Zarbon's side story is really taking me in, I'm in love with him. Vegeta's elegant dialogue though, no matter who he seems to be speaking with, still hits me every time. And this Bulma? Wish I could be her in times of dire need haha! As always, fine piece of work. I'm almost done hehehe.... |
Reviewed By: LareBearr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2013 20:18 PDT
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What? It's been nearly a year since your last update? Why doesn't it feel like it's been that long? O.o Well, anyway, I enjoyed this new chapter. I'm glad they made it to Tarble's planet. I rewatched that special thingy with Tarble, his wife, and Abo and Cado. It cracks me up every time. I really like that you included him in your story. I can't wait for the next update! |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2013 14:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
YES! ok we are back in business! Missed these guys :) How are things? This chapter was great, I was super excited to finally have them meet Tarble and Gure. Love the curious nature of 18 :) |
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2013 19:00 PDT
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OK! So, I am finally half way through this re-read (ok, about half way but whatev). I figured this would be a good time for me to start gushing, even though I already have lol. I can't say enough good things about this but, let me start with characterization. Your depiction of Bulma & Vegeta alone is inspiring and spot-on, but everyone else is not only entertaining, heart-wrenching, hilarious... but also spot on. You've really taken on the ensemble fic with some gusto and beauty. Moving on to your humor - classic and so well executed! I think I said this on the hangout but there are times when I'm laughing aloud at the dialogue and discourse here. Nappa's fart? Brilliant. Radditz and Puar? WHO would have guessed? Ok, I'm going to stop now and continue reading... Also, the shower lemon? O. M. G. Beauteous. Keep up the good work as always! I'll make it to the newest chapter soon I'm sure lol. |
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