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Title: Chapter 31 review
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2010 17:17 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know...the only thing I got from this chapter is that EVERYBODY'S fucking on RS! Lol! I'm glad to know that G/CC are busy "making up for lost time". Hopefully Goten will be conceived! Lol. However both Gohan's and Bulma's inner thoughts added a nice touch to this chapter. |
Title: Chapter 30 review
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2010 16:58 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Probably the funniest chapter you wrote since Radditz got horny from the Puar-plant! Lol! And Nappa checking out Mrs. Briefs was brilliant! It reminded me of when Vegeta decided to live with the Briefs and she handed him those tiny black spandex shorts to train in. Maybe you should incorporate that into your story. And the Radditz/Puar lemon...I'm probably going to skip it, but I can just imagine the hilarity that will ensue because of those two! |
Title: Chapter 29 review
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2010 16:04 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been a while since I last read this fic, and I left off on this chapter! I'm so happy that you decided to write the G/CC lemon. I really needed it. I decided to watch DBZ all over again and I thought about this fic. Thinking about those episodes, especially during the Cell Saga, it had me thinking that G/CC was the couple that fucked around a lot more than B/V! Lol! Either way, the ending was bittersweet and it brought a smile to my face. Now I have to hurry and catch up on the other chapters as well! |
Title: amazing chapter
Reviewed By: Ron'sBella On: November 06, 2010 05:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can i just say how happy and excited it makes me to see you have updated this story? It trully is an amazing piece of fanfiction, and fiction in general. Not sure if you have said this before, but i am wondering if you have ever considered writing a novel? obviously you could not use Vengeance, but you are an incredible writer and you have a way with making the story flow.I have seen this in every chapter. This chapter was so great, loved the suspence and action; i thought i knew what was going to happen. but no, all those twists! (i.e ginyu attempting to switch with gero.) This is honestly my favourite story on mmorg and ffn.I even have it bookmarked on my phone so i can check to see if there is another chapter! Please keep writing, Ron's Bella!
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Title: What a chapter!
Reviewed By: SaeriJenn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2010 14:42 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that your discribtions of Ginyu's body switching technique, the fight scenes, and (the best one) the detailing of the transformation into Super Sayain was breath-taking. I could feel each blow landed, feel the spike of energy surging. That takes quiet the writer to accomplish that.
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2010 08:22 PDT
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Yay for Vegeta!!! Sad for Guru. :( This definitely a great chapter. I'm kind of glad that Gero is out of the picture. He's never been one of my favorite characters for sure. I think DBZ Abridged has ruined me on Nappa the like "Awww, V'geta." Really just had me thinking of all the good times. haha Keep up the good work. Now that Vegeta is super saiyan, I'm ready to see some more of Freeza's men fall... or perhaps even Freeza himself? As always, loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2010 00:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is so good. Keep up the good work. I'll be anxiously waiting for the next update.
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2010 22:13 PDT
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:D mmmm golden aliens... :) I shall have fabulous dreams :) but wow I had a feeling with gero... but dang... poor dende
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2010 16:11 PDT
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Another great chapter! And, Yay! Vegeta's finally SS ^^ Loved the battle scene as well, you write them so well (I wish I could acquire some of your talent) XD haha. Anyway, just, wow. Loved it and can't wait for the next chapter to see what will happen now that certain things are out in the open.
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2010 21:07 PDT
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FUCK! have I really caught up to you? :( How depressing lol... I really like your story... *sigh* but now I am on update watch. :) excited for the next chapter. great writing!
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Reviewed By: ilex9 not logged On: October 20, 2010 17:14 PDT
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I really enjoyed some of the insight you give us with Dende here. Also couldn't help but chuckle at Ginyu's making an entrance just so Vegeta could interrupt him. Nice cliffhanger, definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
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Title: A powerfully written chapter.
Reviewed By: SaeriJenn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2010 21:05 PDT
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It may have taken you some time to release this, but it was definately worth the wait as the chapter, especially near the end with the Nameks' arrival on Red Station, was powerfully written. I love the depth of emotion that you gave to Dende in this chapter. He such an overlooked character in the series that it is nice to see someone writing him such a wonderful role. ^_^ While the cliffhanger had me pulling at my hair, I shall be patiently awaiting the next update. One other thing to maybe help with the whole writing process: go back over your story and make a small list of items/plots that need to be resolved--that may help you focus better on the process of writing while organizing your thoughts and help you see what needs to addressed still within the story.^w^ Definately looking forward to more of your beautiful work.
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2010 19:13 PDT
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Love, love, loved it! I wait with bated breath to read what happens next...God, your fic is so entertaining! Other than how sad I am for cute, little Dende, I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and it's plot transition. I can't wait to see just how bad the proverbial 'shit' will hit the fan, haha. Thanks again, so much, for sharing!! ~Reux
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Reviewed By: please update! On: October 17, 2010 18:55 PDT
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ack! please don't wait as long to update! i have ants in my pants just waiting (wow, that was corny). But seriously, cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2010 15:57 PDT
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Oh suspense! I really liked how things were wrapped up for the moment to allow the plot to go forward. I love the character building and the couples but I like plot stuff too of course. What's going to happen to Guru? Will someone end up switching bodies with Guru? Keep it up! I can't wait to find out! :3
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