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Reviewed By: B On: November 26, 2009 16:31 PST
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Great chapter! I love that they finally got together, can't wait to read more. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: msissyburrows [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2009 22:01 PST
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Nice story you got there I am really enjoying it! That Last bit with V-kun and B-chan was cute he was all flustered! The nerve! Bulma is brazen! She might wear a dress but she deffinetly wears the pants! Please update soon!
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Title: OMG YOU'RE KILLIN ME
Reviewed By: Geta-Baby [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2009 22:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I can't really say my title is true...I just started reading this fic today I'd sadly I'm just left waiting for your next update, def will favorite this for notifications. Anyway, for your question at the end....Idky but I love the freakin Radditz and Puar thing; it's just so strange but then good that I have to love it. Hoping you decide to do a lemon for it just to see; but seriously if Bulma and Vegeta don't have some contact soon I think I'm gonna scream. Lol I never left a review like this so I guess in short what I'm saying is....I love your fic and cant wait til an update.
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2009 01:02 PST
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I only wish that Mrs. Briefs and Chichi weren´t so nosy... sometimes they truly irritate me. Poor Krillin, and I think that the Saiyans are being actually gentle to him (or he wouldn´t be able even to stand now) Hmm, if everybody´s suspecting of Tien, it´s more than probable that HE IS NOT the mole.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2009 19:23 PST
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Yay another chapter. I love Vegeta's reaction to Bulma's teasing. He likes to think that he's all powerful and extremely intelligent but in the end he has no defense against her. Love it! It's good that they're not just jumping each other so soon after meeting each other for real but it's deliciously painful reading the tension between them. Apparently it's pretty obvious if Nappa noticed. As for your question about Puar/Raddtiz, I'm personally not a fan but it's your story, do what you want. If people don't like a certain part they'll just skip over it. (I do really read the majority of the story to know the plot but I'm really just here for the B/V action XD) Can't wait to see where you take it from here.
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2009 22:31 PST
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Yay mild confrontation with V/B. Bulma likes playing with fire huh? Trying to seduce a Sayain just sounds like suicide to me XD
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2009 00:57 PST
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I'd be all for a Puar/Raditz lemon (as long as Puar isn't in his tiny little cat form haha)!! All-in-all another amazing chapter =D I hope Chichi ends up bonding a little more with Gohan (although, its understandable why it wouldn't happen). Also, I have a few guesses as to who the spy is!!! Although, I'm sure when/if we find out it'll be someone I don't expect ;) Can't wait til the next awesome installment!
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Reviewed By: KyaJaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2009 18:39 PST
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Glad to have you back!! Every time I reread this I fall in love with the story all over again! I'd definitely go for some Radditz/Puar action! They deserve it! ~_^
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2009 18:21 PST
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Ohhh I'm glad to see you back! Such a great story! I love the interaction between Bulma and Vegeta! So great! Oh, hun, I would cheer on the Radditz and Puar lemon. What are you waiting for? ;)
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Reviewed By: gamergirllive [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2009 12:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah ha ha ha ha! Yay! I love the interactions between Vegeta and Bulma. ^^ But I agree with nutnatz! It is time for something to happen! =D I can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: nutnatz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2009 01:43 PST
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Ack! the anticipation is ridiculous. I've just waiting for -something- to happen. Them to discover Tien isn't Tien, Radditz to figure out about Puar ( don't need to have that scene btw, the way you did it before was quite fine). Them to find out about Goku and Piccolo being alive. Cause seriously, I felt so bad for Chi Chi when she was disappointed about Sixteen and her sex less life for so many years. Finally, Bulma knows she want him and Vegeta knows he wants her. OMG STOP TEASING!!!
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2009 18:51 PST
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I should hope that you have enough confidence in your work that you don't feel compelled to add a Radditz/Puar scene. It's not necessary and I think it would cheapen your work if you feel it is necessary. If you really, truly feel you have to do it, please consider posting it as a separate story so those of us who don't wish to read that type of material don't have to. Otherwise, I would like to continue reading your story as I think so far it is quite different than anything else I have read and intriguing. No offense, but the Radditz/Puar thing is getting tiresome and I really feel that you could have just as good of a story without feeling the need to keep going back to something that not everyone enjoys reading. Please don't take this as a flame, but the honest opinion you asked for.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2009 18:03 PST
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Awesome chapter. I definitely wouldn't mind some Puar/Radditz lemon.
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Title: Love IT!
Reviewed By: hellspawn9245 On: November 04, 2009 00:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best fic I've read in a long long time please keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2009 10:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this story since yesterday and now I'm up to chapter 14. I haven't read it yet due to your author's notes. But I'm anticipating it. I LOVE this story!!! When I saw your penname on the DBZ/GT list I thought to myself "That person sounds familiar", so I chanced this story sole based on that thought. I'm glad I did. I'm hooked on this fiction and I'm loving it! Radditz and Puar? Hilarious shit! Especially chapter 8 when Puar posed as a tree! I choked on my own laughter at that. The 16 and Chichi scenes kinda weirded me out, but I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Goku will make his return soon. And of course Bulma and Vegeta...those two...can us fans ever get enough of them? NOPE! I'll be looking forward to your next update!
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