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| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] | | Pages (25): [ « ‹ 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 › » ] | Reviewed By: demonwitch [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2009 10:12 PDT
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excellent please continue!
| Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2009 01:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! I loved the Puar/Raditz scene. I laughed my butt off when Puar posed as a plant and Raditz eyed him. lol Vegeta was...well Vegeta. You characterize him very well. At least he liked Bulma, he was pawing her all over the place. Now why oh why did you make Bulma's hair afro? The style is sooo not her. Tien acts weird. Maybe he's Frieza's source? Update soon please. This story is one of the best B/V fics.
| Reviewed By: not a member On: July 28, 2009 19:26 PDT
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Thank you for the thank you. However, no need to email me, I find thanks enough from you when you post a new chapter. Loved this one, in fact, I really enjoy reading the interactions between Gohan and the other Saiyans. Although I would like to hear more about why exactly Gohan does not want to go back to his mother, and whatever happened to Goku - and if Tien knows. Great character development in this one, I loved the ending with Vegeta. Very powerful.
| Title: Loves It~!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: yunglucyboo On: July 28, 2009 17:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its weird normally I do not review on stories, but in this case i need to so you can finish this story!!!! lol Ive found when writers are not movitated, they tend to stop writing. I do not want that to ever happen to this wonderful story. Omg this chapter was great, i completely love this story, its got everything i like for in a fanfic, action, humor, and a plot that makes perfectly sense. Every time you update i feel like its some important event. Oh yeah this chapter was awesome, yes vegeta and bulma met, now i wonder how things will go about after this. shoot its going to be hard for them to get together because how is she going fall for the enemy. Other then that, i hope update this soon, because that was a real cliffhanger.
| Reviewed By: Bulma Peacecraft [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2009 20:34 PDT
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I just caught up woth this story and I am FLOORED with the Raditz/Puar thing. That was FREAKY coming from you, and I loved it!! I think that's the closest you've ever come to yaoi. Way to go!!!!
| Reviewed By: saiyanprincesssarah On: July 16, 2009 05:53 PDT
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this is getting even better!! So Vengeance is vegeta :-) I knew it!!! I can't wait for bulma to discover who he actually is, the attraction is there at the moment! :-) I loved the drunken phone conversation, poor gohan he heard a little too much... At least he knows bulma is alive now! :-) Please write more soon xxxx
| Title: p.s.
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 13:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh p.s. I was very enthralled with the meeting of the Nameks. Great addition!! I loved how hammy and yet how spot-on Guru was. ;) Super!! hehe...
| Title: Ah Yes
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 13:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello~ I am so sorry I've been out of touch. This is going so wonderfully! Seriously, I'm hooked on this. I just love your dialogue; I really think it's the best part of your writing style. However, you also manage to describe things perfectly without being over-bearing. I find that, even when it seems like things are getting out of control in the plot or with the characters, you rein it in beautifully! For example, the drunken conversation with V&B - perfect! I don't know if I could answer the what color are your nipples question. ;) haha! Anyhow, I'm so excited you're continuing this and I'm excited to read more. It's great that one of the vets of this fandom has come back with a super story and engaging plot - naturally. ;) I eagerly await the next chapter!! Thank you. :D
| Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Cellar_Door [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 20:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the BEST DBZ Fanfic I've ever read. I love what you're doing with the story and I love the tension between Vegeta & Bulma! They always were my favorite. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Can't wait!
| Reviewed By: not a member On: July 12, 2009 20:21 PDT
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Glad to see you've updated! Sorry that you're feeling uninspired, as I know plenty of people like this fic and even review regularly. I'm quite eager to find out what happens with Tien, and if he will come out of his catatonic state and be back to somewhat of his old self. Also, wonderful job placing in the sexual tension between Vegeta and Bulma... I can't wait for another face-to-face meeting with those two. In fact, I can't even wait for you to update next. You're doing a great job, keep it up!
| Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 14:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was away for a few weeks. Seeing 2 chapters added to this wonderful story was a pleasant surprise. I'm sorry you have writers block. This is a great story and I hope you will finish it. I can hardly wait for when Bulma and Vegeta will meet XD
| Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 10:28 PDT
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To be honest, I hadn´t liked much the chap 6, save by the encounter with Dende, Nail and Guru, but I enjoyed this 7 a lot. I already suspected that 16 had a crush on Chichi... now I wonder who´ll be someone´s turn. The idea of Vegeta getting abrutly waken up to respond silly questions made me laugh, as well the fact of 16 never getting drunk. I, too, liked Gohan´s comments about Nappa and women (ewww... hope Nappa won´t run into Bulma unless Vegeta is around for protection. I saw enough fics of Nappa trying to rape/hittin on her) I just hope that now Gohan finds a way to contact Bulma and the others - poor Chichi, she´ll be so happy! BTW, it´s great the way you portraited her, trying to get over her losses by becoming a fighter again. I always thought it was a waste she becoming a whining, tyrannic housewife like AT did to her.
| Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 02:49 PDT
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that chapter was amazing, I really enjoy your portrayal of Gohan and how he interacts with the other saiyans, I especially like when you represent the clash of viewpoints, betweent the saiyans outlook and Gohans, especially the part when Gohan made that very sharp and insightful observation of Nappa's actions towards women and Frieza's actions towards Vegeta. I am really loving your Bulma and Vengence interactions the chemistry between them is electric, even through radiocommunication, the back and forther banter, and that comment from Vengeance made me laugh, I didn't expect him to say that, and then when you cut to the next scene to reveal Vegeta with Gohan walking in on his conversation, I was on the edge of my seat. I can't wait for the next chapter, definitely look forward to more Venegeance/Vegeta Bulma interactions. I also thought it was sweet the way you have Sixteen fall in love with Chi Chi, it's interesting the way we are reminded he is a machine, like the fact that he can't get drunk with Bulma, as alcohol just gets converted into usuable energy, yet despite this, he still has capacity to feel human emotions to fall in love. I felt this was a very touching moment, and also a striking comparison to the cold and unfeeling Dr Gero, who is probably, emoptionally, more mechanical than Sixteen.
| Title: Finally!
Reviewed By: Jootjuh On: July 07, 2009 04:45 PDT
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I think it's great! I haven't red fanfics in like two years or so.. But when I saw your name, it looked familiar. And like four years ago I red your stories on your(?) site loulou. So i just know your stories are good. This story is really catchy! Like it very much! Like to read more about Vegeta and Bulma catching up again:P Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: starb rella On: July 06, 2009 19:01 PDT
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THis is a wonderful fic! I love it so far! it's great! Keep up the great work. I love how original this piece is compared to how other people wrote how earth was taken over!
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