| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] |
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 06:54 PDT
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I cant wait to see what happens next in the coming chapter. I mean whats going to happen between Vegeta and Bulma? Will she start to distance herself from Vegeta only to cause a rift between them? So many questions and so little answers. Thank you for this chapter and I hope you don't wait another month to update this story.
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2010 18:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no a rift! I can't wait to see how it works out.. though I'm obviously hoping Bulma will get over it and Vegeta will get over himself and just accept the bond!! :) I love this fic! Keep up the good work! Great job!! I look forward to another update!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2010 16:43 PDT
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Uh-oh, I think Vegeta's gonna regret saying accept it or get out 'cause there's no way that Bulma is going to easily accept it. It is a little hypocritical of her to have been okay with it until she saw it for herself but I understand where she's coming from, Frieza being a horrible beast that controlled Vegeta all his life one would consider that he had no choice but to kill as told. Can't wait to see how this will change things between them.
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Reviewed By: np On: July 08, 2010 15:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this story! its an awesome idea and its written great. the radditz/puar thing is really cute too lol. update soon please!
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Reviewed By: KB On: June 10, 2010 02:10 PDT
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its ME AGAIN just letting you know I'm still reading and its STILL AMAZING keep it up I want MOOOORRREE
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 19:37 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know what else would make Goku feel a lot better and heal him a lot faster? SEX!!! Yup! Sex! Lots and lots of SEX!!! Think about it: his body will get the much needed workout, the stress will leave his body, his energy won't go to waste, and I'm more than positive that Chichi will reciprocate in kind! So yes! SEX is the only answer for Goku's ailment! Mmm...hmm...glad I thought of it. That's mainly because I'm highly anticipating on reading a Goku and Chichi lemon now. Not to say that I don't enjoy Bulma and Vegeta, but Goku and Chichi, I've always adored. And let's face it: VB gets tiring after a while. But finding well-written GCC fics is like finding a needle in a haystack. So I'm hoping that you'll write one soon for my favorite DBZ couple.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 17:30 PDT
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I love seeing Vegeta being so playful, he's definitely letting himself enjoy what's between them more. I wonder if Bulma will bring up what Radditz and her talked about, and if Radditz will ever be able to walk again after Vegeta's learn he told her about it. I also wonder what she'd think if she knew about what happened when Vegeta tried to forget her, you know, since it went so well ;). Lots of different things happening and it's looking like it's building up to something big. Totally didn't expect Zarbon being a traitor. Maybe I should go back and re-read the story again, not that I'll have to force myself ;p. Can't wait 'til next time.
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Title: ch 26
Reviewed By: venus legacy not logged On: June 09, 2010 14:15 PDT
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Again, I like how you pay particular attention to the conflicts within the characters. Zarbon's a perfect example of this as you show the connflict between his duty as a soldier to freiza and his personal loyalty/will to himself and his homeland. I worry that his failure to disguise his voice may have repercussions for him. There are eyes and ears everywhere in the empire
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Reviewed By: Bulmaveg Otaku On: May 17, 2010 11:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! I've been reading your story, eagerly looking forward to updates, and I just realized that I couldn't remember leaving a review so far. Well, shame on me. As a fellow author I know what it's like wishing and hoping and waiting for those review to come rolling in. Anyway, the creativity and uniqueness of your story is a real delight! Keep up the good work!
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Title: ilex9
Reviewed By: ilex9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2010 07:23 PDT
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Still very good reading. I missed the last chapter and read the two together and they flowed nicely from one to the next. I was wondering when you were going to reveal Ginyu. By now it was pretty obvious who's body he'd snatched, but in the beginning it did take a little guessing, so good job with that.
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2010 03:29 PDT
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"the bastard who got himself and my son tossed in hell", hrrr!! As if Goku had made that on purpose. Moments like this I hate Chichi. Allright, she suffered a lot, but she hadn´t the right to treat him like this.
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2010 21:13 PDT
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poor goku & chichi. it looks like I was incorrect in my initial assumption about Dende! :o Can't wait til next chapter
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Reviewed By: shadow'sgirl On: April 28, 2010 19:15 PDT
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Great chapter!! i knew it was Nail!! im glad its not tien! ps. MORE LEMONS PLEASE!!! lol
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Title: A must read
Reviewed By: Dimitrova On: April 28, 2010 02:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely gorgeous fanfic with an intricate plot, a lot of characters with interesting issues, irony, suspense and very nice love stories. The pace and the writing are really good and with a lot of background details. It's also very realistic and in character... I knew that this return to Red Station would be eventfull, I'm not deceived at all. Nice Bulma/Vegeta moments, we've got the mole and Goku is so cute with his drawing !!
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Reviewed By: venuslegacy not logged On: April 27, 2010 23:16 PDT
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wow, you really snuck that one by me, now I wonder if Guru and dende know, if so what is there strategy, keep the enemy close? I thought that was really sweet what Goku did for Chi chi, the gift he left under her door, I hope Chi Chi appreciates it, i can understand there is a lot that needs to be resolved between them, it also seems as if Gohan has unresolved issues with how his father is towards Chi Chi. You even gave us a lovely treat with the vegeta nad bulma interaction. It's interesting that Bulma and Vegeta seem like the "normal" couple now and Goku and Chi Chi are the angsty ones ( I wonder how long that will last? lol). I also felt for 16, and I wonder how he feels, if he even understands what he is feeling, I still remember what he said to krillin in the previous chapter when asked if he was ok, he said something like one of his parts was broken and he was trying to fix it, maybe that was a telling revelation about his psyche?
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