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Reviewed By: Lollienh On: June 16, 2009 06:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can not wait for you to update! I love the story!
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Reviewed By: Kit Kat Monster. On: June 14, 2009 17:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Just keeps getting better, for some reason, there aren't that many B/V stories like this (Well, not that many that are good) but I think this is just what we need! I wasn't to sure of it at first, but now I'm just dieing for the next installment. B/V must be my favorite paring, I've never been much of a yaoi fan, but I even enjoyd the odd Raditz/Puar pairing- thats gotta be a first in FF history those two have been put together! lol. please dont keep me waiting for the next part! :D
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Reviewed By: not a member On: June 14, 2009 15:06 PDT
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Glad to see you've updated! This chapter was funny, I thought the Radditz/Puar situation was hilarious. I also enjoyed the interaction between Bulma and Vegeta, both in the beginning of the chapter and the end. Krillin's codename was also quite comical. Can't wait for you to update again!
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2009 19:53 PDT
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Uh-oh, busted! :) Hey, cool use of Puar's powers. I haven't read anything else that depicts them so well. Looking forward to your next chapter.
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Title: EVIL!!
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 16:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hooooo evil cliffhanger!! However, quite masterfully built up and plotted! As usual, a great chapter. :) I wanted to tell you thank you for your reviews - you're awesome! But now, onto your chapter. :D This is fabulous. I'm really getting a good sense of the world these characters are living in. What I love about A/U's is that they really give the author a chance to develop his/her writing talent while using familiar characters that we all know and love. You've done that quite masterfully so far (but that's as usual)! I really feel the suspense and mystery that's building in this world where Frieza is in control and everyone involved is sort of sneaking around on the underbelly of everything. Espionage rules. :) Great job, and can't wait for the next one!! Keep up the fine work!!
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Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 03:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol Very good! Excellently written. The story is both sad and hilariously funny. You have my full attention so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: not a member On: June 01, 2009 20:59 PDT
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Yes! They finally meet! I've been waiting for this moment.. I love your writing style so much! While I do wish your chapters were a bit more detailed, I understand this is only the beginning, and I am eager to read more. I am excited to see where the interaction between Bulma and Vegeta goes, and I'm also curious to know how much Bulma may dislike Vegeta from prior experience and whether or not Vegeta knows about her and her little faction of humans. I liked that you still included Yamcha's death in this chapter, it gave more depth to his and Bulma's relationship. (While of course, I'd like to see more depth in Bulma and Vegeta's! ^_~). I also wanna see what happens with Gohan, and did Goku die? I'm assuming he did...Can't wait for your next chapter!! Thanks!
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 20:29 PDT
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Wow so exciting! I can't wait to see what'll happen next? Yay to a little Vegeta and Bulma interaction.
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Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 05:22 PDT
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YAY for the first face to face meeting!
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Kinky-Typo On: May 27, 2009 08:20 PDT
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Yay! I'm so happy you're getting back into the DBZ fandom and I'm super excited that it's a V/B fic. :P
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Reviewed By: not a member On: May 25, 2009 22:13 PDT
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Holy Cow! LMAO to Roshi and Oolong also. However, very suspenseful! Loving the prequel action, that's always some of my favorite even though I miss Vegeta.. *tear*. But he'll be back soon right?? That entire sequence was very tragic. I admire the way that you listed out everything that happened by the time that had elapsed. It made it seem robotic but horrific at the same time. Can't wait for your next update, please keep it up! Loving the story so far!
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Title: oooo....
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2009 20:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I'm hooked now. You really have a knack for suspense! Oh, and also "tech-speak". Sci-fi is perfect when it's written by someone who knows how to make it sound believable. Kudos! Not many realize how much thought goes into describing a spaceship's engines, for example. :) Anyhow, I'm excited to see what happens next. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Title: Will be awesome.
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2009 12:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I'm very excited to read this fic! But, naturally, that's because you're the author! So glad to see another fic from you, and I'm very interested to see how this plays out. So they have Gohan already hmm? Eeeexcellent. :D
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Reviewed By: not a member On: May 17, 2009 14:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! AHH! YOU'RE BACK! I love your fanfiction so much! You're probably one of the best out there, and even though you've hardly written anything for this first chapter, I am already hooked and waiting to read what comes next. You seem to always utilize amazing character development and the unfolding of your storylines is uncanny. I know this review isn't long, and please don't be discouraged by the lack of them on this website, but please please please continue! Good to see you're back.
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Title: Cool start!
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2009 18:52 PDT
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Great to see a new DBZ fic from you! :hug:
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