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Reviewed By: not a member On: July 03, 2009 22:51 PDT
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This was a great chapter! Great to get some insight on Gohan and the other Saiyans, that was very nice. Although I do still wonder what happened to Goku. And "...the elusive cock-billed mallard" was hilarious, I laughed out loud at that one. That entire sequence was hilarious. Keep it up, great work!
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2009 06:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how the Saiyans interact with Gohan. Can not wait until you update again. Looking forward to Vegeta and Bulma meeting again, and even Puar and Raditz. ^__^
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Reviewed By: saiyanprincessarah On: June 30, 2009 00:59 PDT
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wow this is getting really good! I love the way Vegeta is portrayed. :-) Please do write more!! I'm loving this fic more and more as I read yay! ^_^ Good work x
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 08:08 PDT
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Wow, I was wondering what had happened to Goku and Piccolo. I just wonder why Goku hasn´t be able to find his son yet. What I really lament is Gohan´s situation. Poor kid - captured, sent to a world completely diferente for him, convinced certainly all the people he loves are dead, having to witness acts of heinous violence everyday. That´s enough to mark a child for the rest of his life - not to mention that I don´t believe Radditz is actually a nurturing uncle. I´d like to see how´d be Gohan´s and Puar´s meeting, if that´ll ever happen. What really makes me confused is why does he has to learn Saiyan from Radditz? The chip doesn´t work for Saiyan language???? By last, the chip thing gave me the creeps. Though I´m not exactly vain or pretty, I´m as sensitive as Bulma about my hair. I just hope that there´s nothing besides translations in Gero´s chips - like something that would make him dominate the Z Team´s minds, for example. Ewww.
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 06:37 PDT
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Forgot to say before, but another thing that made me a lot happy is that Bulma is not the only Earth survivor as it usually happens in Earth-destroyed fics. Most of Z-team is there, and comic reliefs too... just like in DBZ canon. Must confess that the Puar/Radditz stuff has shocked me a bit... but it was funny. Now I wonder two things: how Vegeta could cause that explosion at distance, and why didn´t he suspect yet tha "the blue-haired bimbo" is actually Blue.
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 06:33 PDT
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CIBERPUNK!! This first chapter caught me instantaneously (though I immediately noticed that "Vengeance" was Vegeta. I wonder how long will take to Bulma and her friends to realize that). I was initially confused about Yamcha´s death... it seemed unnecessary to me. But then I realized that, even if Vegeta let him go, probably Yamcha wouldn´t be able to escape, since Vegeta´s companions were coming. I´m glad to see Bulma as an useful, active scientist, instead of turned into a sex slave or locked up in a labhoratory as a sort of Guinea pig.
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Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 06:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well. I think VenusLegacy said all I wanted to say XD
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2009 04:59 PDT
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This is absolutely fantastic, I've been looking for a good epic to sink my teeth into, and this story definitely delivers. I love the way you weave your unique plot as well as the detail paid to the characterisations. You really do enable us to gain an insight into their inner psyche. I thought that was very insightful at the end of chapter five where we are shown Vegeta's reaction to Arlia, I always wondered about that if maybe Vegeta, by persuing a pseudo-rescue mission was in his own way acting out his own rebellion against frieza, albeit vicariously through the arlian inhabitants. I also like your Vegeta and Bulma interactions and I am loving the vegeta vengeance dynamic, you really give him that mysterious dangerous allure, and I thought the way you worked both persona's into Bulma's dream was very good, can' wait till their next encounter. I was surprised by the Puar and Raditz moment, as it was quite a significant part of that chaptee, but I figured that it will be important in the future perhaps raaditz will play a crucial role in the fate of the earthlings. I was also very intrigued by the way you show the saiyans interacting with Gohan, we get a small glimpse of the family pack mentality of the saiyans perhaps, and it's interesting to see this more paternal? side of the saiyans, beneath the coldness and brutality they are fiercely protective of their own, at least i Gohan's case I think.
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Reviewed By: not a member On: June 20, 2009 21:39 PDT
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Excellent! There was so much revealed here that I wanted to know; clears some things up, although I still want to find out what happens to Goku, since I know Gohan turns out alright. And Piccolo. Thanks for giving a backstory though, it was a helpful update and gave more to character development as well. I particularly liked Vegeta's thoughts at the end of the chapter, as well as Bulma's in the beginning. You're doing a fantastic job on this fic, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2009 09:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating! I love that you went back and explained a little more about what happened on Earth, even if I was a little bummed since I was looking forward to more Vegeta and Bulma interactions. Update soon! Love the chapter!
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Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2009 01:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol I loved this chapter too! I was afraid to read the Puar/Radditz scene 'cause I'm not a yaoi fan but it was funny. Actually I didn't view it as yaoi since Puar isn't human. lol When Radditz finds out that he's rutting with a cat he'll go ballistic. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lollienh On: June 16, 2009 06:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can not wait for you to update! I love the story!
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Reviewed By: Kit Kat Monster. On: June 14, 2009 17:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Just keeps getting better, for some reason, there aren't that many B/V stories like this (Well, not that many that are good) but I think this is just what we need! I wasn't to sure of it at first, but now I'm just dieing for the next installment. B/V must be my favorite paring, I've never been much of a yaoi fan, but I even enjoyd the odd Raditz/Puar pairing- thats gotta be a first in FF history those two have been put together! lol. please dont keep me waiting for the next part! :D
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Reviewed By: not a member On: June 14, 2009 15:06 PDT
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Glad to see you've updated! This chapter was funny, I thought the Radditz/Puar situation was hilarious. I also enjoyed the interaction between Bulma and Vegeta, both in the beginning of the chapter and the end. Krillin's codename was also quite comical. Can't wait for you to update again!
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2009 19:53 PDT
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Uh-oh, busted! :) Hey, cool use of Puar's powers. I haven't read anything else that depicts them so well. Looking forward to your next chapter.
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