| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] |
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: September 19, 2009 15:07 PDT
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lovein it!!! keep it going!
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2009 05:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! Vegeta is at Red Station with Bulma! Poor Bulma her fantasy dreams of Vengeance are ruined. Wonderful chapter! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2009 03:36 PDT
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Wow, finally things are coming to set up. It´l indeed be hard both for Chichi and Gohan to deal with what he has become. I only wish that Nappa´ll be able to keep his hands off the women while Vegeta´s in the tank - I don´t trust him.
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: not a member On: September 07, 2009 22:37 PDT
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Omg! This chapter was so good, I am dying for the next one. And Tien -- if he is Ginyu, then Bulma and Vegeta are up a creek. I loved the interactions in this chapter, between all of the characters in every scene, notably the one at the end. I am so thrilled to see where you take this next, keep it up! Thanks.
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Title: TFS..."no!"
Reviewed By: dragonNebula On: September 07, 2009 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Hey Vegeta?" "What is it Nappa?" "Are we there yet?" "no" "Hey Vegeta?" "What?" "Are we there yet?" "No" "Hey Vegeta?" "WHAT!" "Are we there yet?" "NO!" "Hey Vegeta?" "WHAT!!!""Are we there yet?" "AAAUHHHG!" TFS rules! lol! I so love this story! You do great writing! But where has Piccolo and Goku been? Still in those cages? SHAME! ;p Anyways, please don't rush and destroy a good thing but please post another chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: September 07, 2009 20:17 PDT
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LOVE this chapter, and the last one. Please update soon!!! I just cant wait to see what happens. i love the characters that u've created. only you can make a story this good with them!
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Reviewed By: gamergirllive [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 18:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waugh!!!! How could you leave it off THERE?! >_<
I know you just updated this... but... UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 15:47 PDT
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You're killing me, softly!!!!!!!!!! God, you make me want to hate you SO MUCH! Yet I can't!!!! Moar chapters =D I demandz it, with a cherry ontop!
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 14:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God that was such a fan-freaking-tastic chapter! The ending was just amazing! I love this fic!
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2009 16:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! Vegeta is going to Red Station! Yay! Update soon! Poor Sixteen having no manhood.
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2009 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! Chichi moving on to Sixteen. I hate to think about anyone leaking information but I wonder if it might be Tien. Love the interactions between Vegeta and Bulma!
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Title: Once again Fantastic!
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 12:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my Lord I had said I was going to review the last chapter and never did, so please consider that this is for the past two because I have so much to say! That is nothing new though. :) Of course this has been awesome. The whole Raditz/Puar situation has me in stiches. I LOVE it! It's great how you can make a little shapeshifting cat seem like such a sex fiend!!! :D I think my favorite line in Chapter 10 involved Dr. Gero "bent over a slab" trying to create the best "mechanical dick" possible. Brilliant!!! However, as I mentioned you do have a penchant for the macabre and a super handle on it at that. In that sense, I was really touched by the scene involving Zarbon and Frieza. There hasn't been much about Zarbon yet and even so I felt really sorry for him in that moment. Has Vegeta gone Super Saiyan??? Hmmm... and now that they're off to Red Station, what does this mean for Bulma? Suspense!!! Of course, this means you must come back soon with the next one. :) I sympathize with your busy life, but really... this is just too much of a cliffy! :D Hope to hear more soon!! Bravo.
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 11:06 PDT
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Y´know, I´m starting to suspect about Oolong... he´s not that intelligent or evil, but he´s certainly amoral and dishonest. My other suspect is Dr. Briefs - perhaps he´s doing that innocently, or worried that Vengeance might harm his daughter (I saw something like that in some fics). I don´t believe that Tien is the culprit - certainly NOT after everything he passed on the slave champs, unless he has been somehow brainwashed. Now I really pitied Zarbon. Nobody deserves to be touched by such a... eww... calling Freeza a monster would be an insult for the poor monsters. ""Iseducedhimandalmostsleptwithhim" XD XD That reminded me those good episodes of Friends and Fraser (nostalgic sigh). Funny is that Chichi, despite admitting her need, she still thinks she´s one to be moralistic and criticize Bulma.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2009 15:32 PDT
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There is not a person alive who would blame Bulma for that fantasy. Even if we know that it's the same person, for her, that's about the hottest thing ever. Great chapter, can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2009 15:14 PDT
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Gah!
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