| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2010 08:05 PST
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Yay Red Station! Hopefully there won't be too much awkwardness between Chichi and Goku after all that's happened, though there has to be some I suppose. And wonderful to see actual verbal contact between Blue and Vengeance, and just as sexy of a chat as I hoped. XD Looks like Vegeta is learning to accept his want more each time we see him, though it's completely understandable that he wary since, for him, it came out of nowhere. Can't wait 'til next time.
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Reviewed By: duoai On: March 05, 2010 03:37 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ohhh... no you must right more, i started reading this at 9pm and have been continuously reading it since... i havent even gone to sleep yet. its so good!
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 17:24 PST
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Ooh! Now I really want to see a B/V reunion! And I'm glad you've liberated Goku and Piccolo. Goku's too kindhearted to be stuck in a situation like he was. It'll be nice to see a Son family reunion, but my vote's for more B/V. :)
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 04:15 PST
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Awesome update! I'm so happy they found Goku and Piccolo! Now, the only question is how long will it be til Chichi finds out?! :O!!! Can't wait for moar! =]
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Reviewed By: ilex9 not logged On: February 26, 2010 16:55 PST
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Every chapter has been enjoyable. There's certainly enough going on to keep this interesting but all the everyday life type scenes at Red Station are always good too.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2010 16:51 PST
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Glad to see the Valentine's rush didn't kill you. It's good that Goku and Piccolo are with the others now. I also like that Bulma is also feeling the craziness towards Vegeta that he is feeling towards her, it's only fair after all. Good chapter can't wait 'til next time. (Hopefully it won't be too much longer that Bulma and Vegeta contact each other again.)
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2010 03:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Squee! So I have my theories about Nail at this point, but I won't spoil anything XD Can't wait to see what happens when Vegeta finds out another Sayain is alive! The possibilities are endless! Keep up the good work, LOVE this story.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: February 09, 2010 15:00 PST
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Oh I am so excited!
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2010 19:52 PST
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Hmmm... you have me thinking that Nail might be the mystery traitor/Ginyu in disguise. And poor Goku and Piccolo! Hopefully things will be looking up for them soon. But mostly... where's the B/V interaction? *whine* Ah well, all things considered, I am looking forward to your next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: Venus Legacy notlogged On: February 07, 2010 14:55 PST
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Loved loved loved this chapter, every time I see Goku it just brings a smile to my face, and this scene the way him and piccolo worked together, that desperation in Goku, even though the odds were stacked against him, it had a inkling of the old Goku, that unwavering faith that he will succeed, no matter what, yet there was a sinister tone their which also infused his actions, and i wonder how he will be like when he does get free. Also interesting to see the relationship between the two, Piccollo refers to him as his friend, I can't remember if he called him that before. And man i cannot wait for vegeta to find out, their actions were not in vain after all...
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2010 11:03 PST
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Fantastic chapter once again. Although this excitement is killing me. I can't wait to see Bulma and Vegeta interact again! Update again as soon as you can! I can't wait to read it! :)
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2010 06:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sadface no baby Trunks yet. Very interested in seeing where Goku's animal instincts are going to take him. Still dying to see the Puar/Radditz confrontation. Now the next face to face meeting of Blue and Vengeance to look forward to as well. So many delightful possibilities. Keep on writing!
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Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: not a member On: January 26, 2010 23:50 PST
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Another amazing chapter! This one was great, I loved the further development of Zarbon as a character, I am interested as to whether he will be instrumental to the plot later on. Krillin trying to talk to Tien was a good scene, I thought the bit about Krillin in the shower needing Bulma's help was hilarious. Also really enjoyed the whole part with Bulma on Chisal and her visit with Guru.. good to know she's not pregnant... yet? And I can't wait for your next chapter, especially because you are going to be writing about Goku and Piccolo. When are they gonna bust outta there?? LOL. Great work, keep it up, thanks!
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Reviewed By: KB On: January 26, 2010 11:06 PST
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blarg~ I want MORE~!! I wanna see Vegeta storm in kill Ginyu and save the day~! I wanna see Freeza die in Vegeta's hands while Vegeta goes yay happy fun time with Bulma~! Maaaaaaaaaaaa I want I waaaant XD
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 10:04 PST
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ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!! Could it be Dende!!! =O Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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