| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] |
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Reviewed By: preciousjade76 On: April 22, 2013 09:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thank the lawd for the update! I was so excited to see this chapter I almost passed out. Anyway, amazing job on this chapter. Vegeta as usual is an ass, but he wouldn't be Vegeta if he wasn't. I love all the different POVs, it's great to see into everyone's mind. |
Reviewed By: Body Electric [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2013 00:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Getting the notification for this new chapter update REALLY made my day! It's so good to see you back! I plan on rereading this fic to refresh my memory, and I look forward to it. One of the best B/V stories I've read in the entire fandom. I also like how you focus on the other characters and their relationships (Raditz and Puar, it's so wrong that it's freaking RIGHT, gotta love it). Doesn't matter how long the next updates are, I'll be patiently waiting with open arms. Can't wait for more B/V smexiness. Keep it up and take care! |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2013 21:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok time for a bit of a happy dance....ok now that thats out of the way... welcome back and thank you very much for the update the way vegeta was acting is a bit funny and tarble is just so sweet eighteen cracks me up with the way she thinks can't way for more |
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2013 20:08 PDT
Comment/Review:
Welcome back! It's so nice to see an update from you. I really liked this chapter. Something about the 17 and 18's conversation made me think they were going to (with good intentions) sabotage Bulma and Vegeta's birth control. haha I look forward to seeing a potential 18 and Krillin pairing in the future. There was a lot of talk about the status of relationships this chapter; I hope it's foreshadowing more progress with Vegeta and Bulma...or maybe it's not and I'm reading too much into it. In any case, great to see you back! Can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Nancy103 On: April 21, 2013 17:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
An update! Thank you! I wonder who will end up with Eighteen ;-) And the best jump between paragraphs.... "Tarble really is awfully pleased to see his brother, nevermind the circumstances. "Fuck!" Vegeta snarled... LOL !! Thanks again for posting! |
Reviewed By: nancy103 On: April 03, 2013 16:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there! I just finished reading all 47 chapters. Took about 3 days but it was SO worth it! I found out about this story from the "We're Just Saiyan" group and when you were a guest on their podcast. You were great on that, btw. Anyway, fantastic and very different story. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading it. When you have the time, please update as I am excited to see how Tarble and his knowledge can help out Goku. And I gotta admit, the relationship of Radditz and Puar is hilarious and great! So much fun to read about them. Thanks again for the really wonderful story and looking forward to an update. Be well and thank you!! |
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2013 18:30 PDT
Comment/Review:
I am about to read this entire fic from the start again... because it's awesome, and the tension and excitement in the prologue is SO compelling. But also because I haven't kept up enough and I'm remiss. So... this may take me some time but here I go! For the prologue - HOW do you make your dialogue flow so smoothly? For me, this reads as though I were watching it on a screen, but it's not a screenplay. Perhaps that's what draws the reader in so completely. Alright, I'm off to read more. |
Reviewed By: dominaetdae On: March 29, 2013 12:00 PDT
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I absolutely love this story. And I really really enjoy the way you explained why Chi Chi was so against Gohan training and such. I honestly had never thought about it, but she DID change after she had Gohan. And it makes sense that her change was do to more than just having Gohan. I never really cared for Chi Chi as a character, but you've definitely altered my image of her. Anyway, off to read the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2013 20:12 PST
Comment/Review:
Hi, It's been a while so I thought I'd read this through again. I love this story how you portray the characters. Your life must be busy, but I do hope you finish this one day. :) I'll keep waiting and reading either way. Take care, Rena Tsukino |
Reviewed By: cheer1234 On: November 03, 2012 23:00 PDT
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This is incrediblee!!!! i'm only in chapter 17 and i already think it's the best fic ever! |
Reviewed By: FishTVCo On: September 10, 2012 00:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you read this story over and over again? Cause I sure s shit do |
Title: We miss you
Reviewed By: FishTVCo On: July 20, 2012 23:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sniff* *sniff* Where is the next update? *Puppy face* Pleeeeaassssse post soon. I really really like this story! |
Title: Nothing Personal
Reviewed By: kwietasan On: June 17, 2012 21:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off i start by saying, i am very sorry for whatever troubles you are facing and thank you for taking time out to give us all a piece of your imagination. When i first started this story, you blew me away with the originality and your signature style of writing that mixes humor,romance and angst into one interesting read. However i must say that the last few chapters you have written have been painful to get through. Your last update was very unsatisfying, I understand the need for character development which many authors fail to do in fanfiction, but you are focusing on developing minor characters rather than developing the actual story. 3/4 of your recent update focused on the "relationship" of a cat and a jealous saiyan. The scene was easily predictable and very amateur for an author of your caliber. Then the remainder of the chapter you decided to fill with frieza's character if all people. to top that off i dont understand how bulma and vegeta went from just meeting to boning and now bulma thinks of tarble as her brother in law?? you have not shown how their relationship has gotten to such a point because you are to busy focusing on minor characters. This story has went from being an epic to a soap opera in less than 10 chapters. unless you get back to the origins of this story i think you will begin to loose the interest of many. Please remember your audience is not just a bunch of teenagers looking for pwp. You have grown people who do actually enjoy a good plot, following your updates. |
Reviewed By: LareBearr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2012 22:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one! And to meet Tarble! Keep it up! :) |
Reviewed By: SniperSnake [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2012 08:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story by pure chance and out of all the V/B stories I've read (prbly a 1000+) this is by far the best. I read this story straight thru and I'm overjoyed that you updated. In regards to your personal life, I hope that the worst is over. Keep your head up Ms Kitty and I'll look forward to seeing more innovation from you as you bring this wonderful brainchild to a conclusion. |
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