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Reviewed By: vicky_aka_bulma@yahoo.com On: August 06, 2009 17:23 PDT
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XD I so love you for writing you know. sooooo much!!!
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Title: Woo hoo~~!!
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2009 15:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry this took me a few days to review, but I wanted to make sure I read this when I had a chance to sit down and really take it all in. :) Anyway, as usual this is fantastic. I know we were chatting about this before, but I really do think you handle more serious subject matter with grace. In fact, at the end of this chapter when Vegeta, in perfect form by the way, was scolding Gohan I really couldn't help but feel the sincerity in his warning. But, also as usual you do manage to make the reader feel a bit of relief with the comedy. This is something I always have trouble with so, honestly, this is a gift! PLEASE continue and even though you say this chapter was hard to write it was certainly not difficult to read. It always feels that way to an author I think!! ;) Also, I'm very excited to see exactly how and why Vegeta and Bulma come to know each other's identity!!!
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Reviewed By: thewarofgenesisthree On: August 03, 2009 04:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is fantastic! I love this, and check my email often for updates, even though I don't even use that email address anymore! I think this is one of your best work yet, and I really do think you're improving as the years go by! Keep up the good work, and update soon please! ^^
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Title: Bravo!!
Reviewed By: tinalynn On: August 02, 2009 00:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this chapter kept me on the edge on my computer chair. now im wondering if vegeta/vengeance is gonna figure out that blue is really bulma the one he thought of as a bimbo at the meeting!! other than that, your doing a fabulous job!keep up the super work
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Reviewed By: demonwitch [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2009 10:12 PDT
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excellent please continue!
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Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2009 01:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! I loved the Puar/Raditz scene. I laughed my butt off when Puar posed as a plant and Raditz eyed him. lol Vegeta was...well Vegeta. You characterize him very well. At least he liked Bulma, he was pawing her all over the place. Now why oh why did you make Bulma's hair afro? The style is sooo not her. Tien acts weird. Maybe he's Frieza's source? Update soon please. This story is one of the best B/V fics.
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Reviewed By: not a member On: July 28, 2009 19:26 PDT
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Thank you for the thank you. However, no need to email me, I find thanks enough from you when you post a new chapter. Loved this one, in fact, I really enjoy reading the interactions between Gohan and the other Saiyans. Although I would like to hear more about why exactly Gohan does not want to go back to his mother, and whatever happened to Goku - and if Tien knows. Great character development in this one, I loved the ending with Vegeta. Very powerful.
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Title: Loves It~!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: yunglucyboo On: July 28, 2009 17:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its weird normally I do not review on stories, but in this case i need to so you can finish this story!!!! lol Ive found when writers are not movitated, they tend to stop writing. I do not want that to ever happen to this wonderful story. Omg this chapter was great, i completely love this story, its got everything i like for in a fanfic, action, humor, and a plot that makes perfectly sense. Every time you update i feel like its some important event. Oh yeah this chapter was awesome, yes vegeta and bulma met, now i wonder how things will go about after this. shoot its going to be hard for them to get together because how is she going fall for the enemy. Other then that, i hope update this soon, because that was a real cliffhanger.
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Reviewed By: Bulma Peacecraft [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2009 20:34 PDT
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I just caught up woth this story and I am FLOORED with the Raditz/Puar thing. That was FREAKY coming from you, and I loved it!! I think that's the closest you've ever come to yaoi. Way to go!!!!
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Reviewed By: saiyanprincesssarah On: July 16, 2009 05:53 PDT
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this is getting even better!! So Vengeance is vegeta :-) I knew it!!! I can't wait for bulma to discover who he actually is, the attraction is there at the moment! :-) I loved the drunken phone conversation, poor gohan he heard a little too much... At least he knows bulma is alive now! :-) Please write more soon xxxx
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Title: p.s.
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 13:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh p.s. I was very enthralled with the meeting of the Nameks. Great addition!! I loved how hammy and yet how spot-on Guru was. ;) Super!! hehe...
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Title: Ah Yes
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 13:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello~ I am so sorry I've been out of touch. This is going so wonderfully! Seriously, I'm hooked on this. I just love your dialogue; I really think it's the best part of your writing style. However, you also manage to describe things perfectly without being over-bearing. I find that, even when it seems like things are getting out of control in the plot or with the characters, you rein it in beautifully! For example, the drunken conversation with V&B - perfect! I don't know if I could answer the what color are your nipples question. ;) haha! Anyhow, I'm so excited you're continuing this and I'm excited to read more. It's great that one of the vets of this fandom has come back with a super story and engaging plot - naturally. ;) I eagerly await the next chapter!! Thank you. :D
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Cellar_Door [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 20:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the BEST DBZ Fanfic I've ever read. I love what you're doing with the story and I love the tension between Vegeta & Bulma! They always were my favorite. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: not a member On: July 12, 2009 20:21 PDT
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Glad to see you've updated! Sorry that you're feeling uninspired, as I know plenty of people like this fic and even review regularly. I'm quite eager to find out what happens with Tien, and if he will come out of his catatonic state and be back to somewhat of his old self. Also, wonderful job placing in the sexual tension between Vegeta and Bulma... I can't wait for another face-to-face meeting with those two. In fact, I can't even wait for you to update next. You're doing a great job, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 14:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was away for a few weeks. Seeing 2 chapters added to this wonderful story was a pleasant surprise. I'm sorry you have writers block. This is a great story and I hope you will finish it. I can hardly wait for when Bulma and Vegeta will meet XD
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